Monday, 19 January 2015

WEEK 4


No 21 Jalan Imam Yusof 28/ks13,
Kampung Perigi Nenas Pulau Indah,
42920 Pelabuhan Klang.

 January 19, 2015
The Manager,
Butik Jalinan Kasih,
No 28 Jalan Kasturi,
42920 Klang,

Dear Sir/Madam,
APPLICATION FOR THE POST OF EDITING PHOTOGRAPHER.

I would like to apply for the post of editing photographer in your boutique.
Currently, I was working as a photographer in a boutique. I am looking for a more challenging boutique and allows me to learn new things.
I am prepared to be called up for an interview by the boutique at any time convenient. I hope that my application will receive a favourable reply form you.

Yours Faithfully,
shafirah
(NOR SHAFIRAH BINTI HASSIM)
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15 comments:

  1. Unknown5 February 2015 at 04:18


    January 19, 2015
    The Manager,
    Butik Jalinan Kasih,
    No 28 Jalan Kasturi,
    42920 Klang,

    it must be ,

    January 19, 2015

    The Manager,
    Butik Jalinan Kasih,
    No 28 Jalan Kasturi,
    42920 Klang,
    ... font must be arial ya .... great ☺☺

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  2. Unknown5 February 2015 at 07:27

    Please dont underline the head line..and the font must be arial behave yourself

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  3. Unknown8 February 2015 at 01:48

    it wrong!! do again...so bad,,,

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  4. repair phone pantai dalam kuala lumpur8 February 2015 at 02:52

    Your letter is so short .i hope you have many more ideas

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  5. Unknown8 February 2015 at 03:17

    The title should not be underline since you have written it in upper case

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  6. Unknown8 February 2015 at 03:48

    Address: Put a space between the date and the receiver.
    Title: Do you mean "Photo Editor"?? Because editing photographer means you are editing the photographer himself/herself.
    Content: Include Skills, Experience and qualifications to make more self-promoting points.
    Closure: Include the sentence "in an interview".
    Signature: no need for brackets.
    Overview: Too short. Please redo.

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  7. Unknown8 February 2015 at 03:50

    Don't underline your topic because you have bold and capital latter your topic

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  8. Unknown8 February 2015 at 04:02

    Hurmm

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  9. Unknown8 February 2015 at 04:40

    your letter too short and then your date and salutation need space....

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  10. norsalmina8 February 2015 at 06:16

    the title and the salutation need to space 1.5

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  11. intan_ahmad8 February 2015 at 06:34

    Good! your name doesn't to have put in bracket.

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  12. Unknown8 February 2015 at 07:41

    letter to short..!

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  13. Unknown8 February 2015 at 08:09

    Need to space between title and greetings ..

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  14. Unknown9 February 2015 at 00:47

    Shafirah, true, your letter is too short. For the opening, you need to establish a purpose and details position applying for. For the content, you should highlight education, experience, and training. For the closing, please mention resume. Do not underline the subject line. Overall, good!

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  15. Unknown11 February 2015 at 09:33

    assalamualaikum syap, i just want to say that your letter dont have a date and your letter is to short...make it right buddy..have a nice day :)

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